Tuesday, October 12, 2010

A Moment of Victory

"Inhale...Exhale...Inhale...Exhale."  Breathing hard, I am not able to feel the wet, soothing saliva slide down my throat.  With complete dryness closing off the ability of swallowing, I all of a sudden hear nothing; I am zoned, total silence.  The stench of B.O. is filling my nostrils.  Anticipating for the throw, I stretch my arms out trying to get space.  My hand sliding off the soggy jerseys of the opposing team, and the brisk, cool, night air flying between my fingers.  Glancing at the open spot in the goal, I quickly glare at the glistening ball soaring through the blinding light of the stadium.  Raising my right foot, I...

3 comments:

  1. I really like the way you described the air and how it was crisp. I thought you worded it really well. It was really good.

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  2. I loved this. It appealed to my 5 senses perfectly and amazingly. Probably because i play soccer too.

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  3. wow joel i don't even play soccer and i felt like i was on the feel great description and great use of senses i was totally captivated

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